[Help Request on WIP] Maplestory BGM - Battlefield (Showa Mansion)

[Kouki]

Hello. For the past week I've been trying to create from scratch an MML of a song from Maplestory called Battlefield, which unfortunately I could never find any midi or sheet music of...

Because of that, I had to attempt to write it completely by ear... and I am pretty sure something is wrong with some of the notes because it sounds off.

I have only taken a beginner piano and MIDI class when I was in college, so my music theory knowledge is very low and I am not good at transposing or playing/writing music by ear. I was hoping someone might be interested in helping to fix parts of MML I attached.

I have attached what I have done so far, and this is the actual song from which I was trying to copy the notes of (The MML is for guitar):

Any help is greatly appreciated, and I will of course give credits to anyone who helps in the description, when I post it to the in-game bard board or this site.

 

Maplestory - Battlefield.mml

Edited January 20, 2019 by Kouki